Teacher

Do you agree or disagree with following statement' (2007.5.19) Teachers should be paid as much as doctors, lawyers, or leaders of businesses are. Use reasons and specific details to support your answer. It has been argued among many people whether the payment of teachers should be as much as those of doctors, lawyers, or leaders of businesses. Although it is true that paying a great amount of money can impose a heavy financial burden on the government’s budgets, I believe that they deserve to earn as much as other professionals do. In this essay, I will present briefly two reasons to support my opinion. Most of all, teachers deserve to be paid as much as other professionals because they contribute as preponderantly to the development of their country as the other professionals. Detail Block 1 경영자들 기업과 국가경제발전 기여에 따라 지불 받는다고 한다면, 선생님도 국가 경제발전에 경영자만큼 기여 Given that S + V , S + V --라고 한다면, -- 은 – 이다, / as - as Given that leaders of businesses are paid greatly because of their contribution to the national economy, teachers are making as important a contribution to the economy of their country as the business leaders do. Particularly, teachers discover their pupils’ talent as early as possible and develop the gift intensively, cultivating them into leaders who can lead this society in the future. Detail Block 2 In that teachers are heightening the level of intelligence of ordinary people in their nation by teaching them fundamental knowledge, they are making a great contribution to the improvement of the country. In this respect, they should be rewarded with much economic benefit. Moreover, teachers deserve to earn an equal amount of money wither other leaders in society in that they make an enormous contribution to rendering this society secure and healthy. Detail Block 3 in the period of development, most people envision their future life with the help of their teachers. From the perspective that teachers function as a strong motivator of good functioning of this society, who explains children and teenagers how to realize their dreams and encourage them to achieve their small goals, a proper economic reward for their persistent effort seems to me reasonable. Detail Block 4 Furthermore, teachers devote much time working out their pupils’ difficult problems together with them. In fact, many successful people testify that they would not have been able to achieve what they are now without the advice and devotional help of their teachers while they were in difficult in their childhood and teenage years. In this regard, the justification for their high salary seems to me obvious. Do you agree or disagree with following statement' (2007.5.19) Teachers should be paid as much as doctors, lawyers, or leaders of businesses are. Use reasons and specific details to support your answer. It has been argued among many people whether the payment of teachers should be as much as those of doctors, lawyers, or leaders of businesses. Although it is true that paying a great amount of money can impose a heavy financial burden on the government’s budgets, I believe that they deserve to earn as much as other professionals do. In this essay, I will present briefly two reasons to support my opinion. 토픽 문장 바꿔 쓰기 Topic : Teachers should be paid as much as doctors, lawyers, or leaders of businesses are. → the payment of teachers should be as much as those of doctors, lawyers, or leaders of businesses. → they deserve to earn as much as other professionals do. → teachers deserve to be paid as much as other professionals because they contribute as preponderantly to the development of their country as the other professionals. → teachers deserve to earn an equal amount of money wither other leaders in society in that they make an enormous contribution to rendering this society secure and healthy. 주어의 종류들 - the payment of teachers should be as much as those of - paying a great amount of money - they deserve to earn as much as other professionals do. Most of all, teachers deserve to be paid as much as other professionals because they contribute as preponderantly to the development of their country as the other professionals. To specify this, given that leaders of businesses are well paid because of their contribution to the national economy, teachers are making as important a contribution to the economy of their country as the business leaders do. Particularly, teachers discover their pupils’ talent as early as possible and develop the gift intensively, cultivating them into leaders who can lead this society in the future. In addition, in that teachers are heightening the level of intelligence of ordinary people in their nation by teaching them fundamental knowledge, one of the most important factor of national competitiveness, they are making a great contribution to the improvement of the country. In this respect, they should be rewarded with much economic benefit. Moreover, teachers deserve to earn an equal amount of money with other leaders in society in that they make an enormous contribution to rendering this society secure and healthy. Especially, in the period of development, most people envision their future life with the help of their teachers. From the perspective that teachers function as a strong motivator of good functioning of this society, who explains children and teenagers how to realize their dreams and encourage them to achieve their small goals, a proper economic reward for their persistent effort seems to me reasonable. Furthermore, teachers devote much time working out their pupils’ difficult problems together with them. In fact, many successful people including doctors, lawyers, and leaders in business often testify that they would not have been able to achieve what they are now without the advice and devotional help of their teachers while they were in difficult in their childhood and teenage years. In this regard, the justification for their high salary seems to me obvious. Most of all, teachers deserve to be paid as much as other professionals because they contribute as preponderantly to the development of their country as the other professionals. Detail Block 1 경영자들 기업과 국가경제발전 기여에 따라 지불 받는다고 한다면, 선생님도 국가 경제발전에 경영자만큼 기여 Given that S + V , S + V --라고 한다면, -- 은 – 이다, / as - as Given that leaders of businesses are paid greatly because of their contribution to the national economy, teachers are making as important a contribution to the economy of their country as the business leaders do. Particularly, teachers discover their pupils’ talent as early as possible and develop the gift intensively, cultivating them into leaders who can lead this society in the future. Detail Block 2 In that teachers are heightening the level of intelligence of ordinary people in their nation by teaching them fundamental knowledge, they are making a great contribution to the improvement of the country. In this respect, they should be rewarded with much economic benefit. Moreover, teachers deserve to earn an equal amount of money wither other leaders in society in that they make an enormous contribution to rendering this society secure and healthy. Detail Block 3 in the period of development, most people envision their future life with the help of their teachers. From the perspective that teachers function as a strong motivator of good functioning of this society, who explains children and teenagers how to realize their dreams and encourage them to achieve their small goals, a proper economic reward for their persistent effort seems to me reasonable. Detail Block 4 Furthermore, teachers devote much time working out their pupils’ difficult problems together with them. In fact, many successful people testify that they would not have been able to achieve what they are now without the advice and devotional help of their teachers while they were in difficult in their childhood and teenage years. In this regard, the justification for their high salary seems to me obvious. 국가 경쟁력 향상 business leaders (국가경제에 도움) 인재 양성 – talents 지식 전달 – 모든 학생이 전반적 지식을 갖도록 기반 안정되고 건강한 사회 (doctors / lawyers) 인생의 교훈 – vision 제시 학생들의 꿈을 이룰 수 있게 고민 상담 – 어려움에 처한 학생들과 함께