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关于disadvantages outweigh advantages的论文写作讲解
2017-10-23 来源: 51due教员组 类别: 写作技巧
国外大学的学业是非常繁重的,原因之一就是各种论文作业了。这些论文作业形式多样,每一种的格式都有差异。而disadvantages outweigh advantages就是其中一种,我们需要在论文中对问题进行分析和讨论,下面就给大家讲解一下。
论文写作思路第一步--如何思考
看到优缺点作文时先别慌,别着急写,冷静地分析题目,到底要我干什么…这道题相对容易,但记住问题是让你分析这件事本身(人选择看书的方式),有些同学一激动容易写错,整篇文章变成分析“电子书和纸质书的优缺点”,千万别犯这样的错误。得到题目的信息之后,别着急下结论,再详细思考一下面对这两种选择,我各自有些什么看法。
不要限制自己的写作思路,任何(我的意思是所有)的想法都可以写下来,无所谓是观点还是结论甚至是例子,都可以。然后根据上面写下的内容,进行整理和归类,找到相同部分后概括出自己的观点。此时可以做出判断,我应该选择哪一方作为自己的立场,并开始构思全文。
最后一步才是落笔写作,前面的过程在平时训练时不要偷懒。养成好习惯很可能救你一命。否则一旦遇到你不会的主题,往往都是乱写最后自相矛盾也是很常见的。
写作技巧分享
为了方便大家的记忆,把要点罗列在一起,你可以收藏下来,用的时候回顾一下。
[要点]
1. 开始别选立场,尽可能针对两个对立的观点,写下你的想法。
2. 这类题目实际上是问你的观点,所以别忘了给出自己的。
3. 正面回答题目的问题,你认为优胜于劣,还是劣胜于优。
4. introduction部分就要完成上一步
4.1 同时你可以简单阐述你认为优势或者劣势哪方占比更大
4.2 避免使用背诵下来的模版或套路,考官很容易发现其中的痕迹
5. 无论你选择哪方作为你的观点,全文至少有一段要留给你的对立立场
6. 使用1-2段来解释你选择的立场
7. 全文结尾部分,用不同的表达方式重申你的观点
[特别提示]
题目中只要出现'outweigh',那么就和单纯的解释'advantages and disadvantages'的不同了。advantages outweigh disadvantages与'positive and negative'的主题是完全不同的,千万不要一致对待。
[示例范文片段]
欢迎写下对此类题目的一些看法和建议,你的思路对我们每一位都很有价值,不要放弃自己分享的权利。
It is true that almost everyone wants a car, a TV and a fridge as some of the basic essentials of a good lifestyle. Despite the benefits, I believe that on a long-term view these are outweighed by the disadvantages.
On the one hand, the growing consumption of cars, televisions and fridges has several benefits. At its simplest, the rise of the consumer society stimulates economic growth. The increasing sales figures of cars and household equipment are often associated with more jobs and wealth being created for society. Another advantage is that people can have a higher standard of living than before. Travelling on the road is no longer tedious because individuals can sit in a car, listening to music and enjoying the comfort of air conditioning. In the same way, people may watch television to relax or to gain knowledge, and fridges help them preserve food longer without being stale.
On the other hand, I believe that the above benefits are outweighed by potential problems. Primarily, the use of cars is often held responsible for environmental pollution. Exhaust emissions from automobiles impair the air quality and consequently affect people’s health. For example, in many big cities in the world, urban citizens are suffering from chronic respiratory problems due to the poor air quality. Using fridges and televisions also places a pressure on electricity supply in the world. The growing use of these devices in the home merely compounds the problem of insufficient electricity that has become intractable in many parts of the world.
In conclusion, taking a long-term perspective, I would argue that the drawbacks of this trend outweigh the advantages.
以上就是给同学们分享的带有讨论性质的论文写作技巧,希望能帮到同学们!
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