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建立人际资源圈留学essay开头如何写？essay开头范例讲解
2015-10-29 来源: 51due教员组 类别: 写作技巧
对于留学essay而言，开头的重要性不言而喻，好的开头决定了第一印象，往往招生人员查阅一篇essay用时在数十秒之内，因此，在匆忙的阅览之中，开头就成了印象最深刻的一部分。下面51due海外文书平台要介绍的是留学essay开头的一些范例，供留学生参考，可以借鉴一下是如何写的，当然最好不要生搬硬套。
留学Essay开头范例1：At my age, few people can genuinely claim that they have had a life-changing experience. After attending Leadership in the Business World (LBW) at the Wharton School last summer, I became one of those fortunate people to have experienced a life-changing academic program. Four weeks of meeting business executives, working with teammates through the night perfecting our professional business plan, experiencing the independence and responsibility that will come with college . . . none of this was advertised in the brochure for LBW, but all of this is what made it uniquely meaningful to me.
留学Essay开头范例2：I TROD THE MUD IN THE misty spring rain. It was Qing Ming, the holiday in China when we honored our deceased ancestors. On the ground of the cemetery, drenched fowers lay in my grandfather's remembrance. That morning—a month before my sixth birthday—I clung tightly to my mother's sleeves and fnally learned why he passed away.
留学Essay 开头范例3：HE'S IN MY ARMS, THE NEWEST addition to the family. I'm too overwhelmed. "That's why I wanted you to go to Bishop Loughlin," she says, preparing baby bottles. "But ma, I chose Tech because I wanted to be challenged." "Well, you're going to have to deal with it," she replies, adding, "Your aunt watched you when she was in high school." "But ma, there are three of them. It's hard!"
留学Essay开头范例 4：Every first Thursday of each month I always look around the Van Muren Hall gymnasium looking at the sixty- and seventy-year-old men and wonder what I am doing there with them. They have lived through world-shaping events like World War II, the Korean War, and the Vietnam War, yet I sit there and interact with them as if there were no differences at all. The reason? We simply share a similar hobby.
相信看了之后，对于开头应该写些什么有了一定的了解，要写出精彩的开头，不是易事，可以多阅读一下他人的范文，对于自己理清思路会有益处，还有开头应当让自己的语句有亮点，内容有亮点，这样才能写出一篇好的essay，才能吸引招生官，如果对于这方面还有什么不懂的话，可以咨询51due海外文书平台，我们竭诚为留学生作答。
更多写作技巧和留学文书代写需求，可以关注51du海外文书平台 也可以和我们24小时在线客服QQ:800020041交流哦。-X
留学Essay开头范例1：At my age, few people can genuinely claim that they have had a life-changing experience. After attending Leadership in the Business World (LBW) at the Wharton School last summer, I became one of those fortunate people to have experienced a life-changing academic program. Four weeks of meeting business executives, working with teammates through the night perfecting our professional business plan, experiencing the independence and responsibility that will come with college . . . none of this was advertised in the brochure for LBW, but all of this is what made it uniquely meaningful to me.
留学Essay开头范例2：I TROD THE MUD IN THE misty spring rain. It was Qing Ming, the holiday in China when we honored our deceased ancestors. On the ground of the cemetery, drenched fowers lay in my grandfather's remembrance. That morning—a month before my sixth birthday—I clung tightly to my mother's sleeves and fnally learned why he passed away.
留学Essay 开头范例3：HE'S IN MY ARMS, THE NEWEST addition to the family. I'm too overwhelmed. "That's why I wanted you to go to Bishop Loughlin," she says, preparing baby bottles. "But ma, I chose Tech because I wanted to be challenged." "Well, you're going to have to deal with it," she replies, adding, "Your aunt watched you when she was in high school." "But ma, there are three of them. It's hard!"
留学Essay开头范例 4：Every first Thursday of each month I always look around the Van Muren Hall gymnasium looking at the sixty- and seventy-year-old men and wonder what I am doing there with them. They have lived through world-shaping events like World War II, the Korean War, and the Vietnam War, yet I sit there and interact with them as if there were no differences at all. The reason? We simply share a similar hobby.
相信看了之后，对于开头应该写些什么有了一定的了解，要写出精彩的开头，不是易事，可以多阅读一下他人的范文，对于自己理清思路会有益处，还有开头应当让自己的语句有亮点，内容有亮点，这样才能写出一篇好的essay，才能吸引招生官，如果对于这方面还有什么不懂的话，可以咨询51due海外文书平台，我们竭诚为留学生作答。
更多写作技巧和留学文书代写需求，可以关注51du海外文书平台 也可以和我们24小时在线客服QQ:800020041交流哦。-X
