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优秀申请文书范文(纽约时报刊载)

2016-01-21 来源: 51due教员组 类别: 留学资讯

申请文书,作为美国大学申请时需要提交的材料,也显得十分重要,很多留学生将申请文书当作展示自己能力的舞台,却忽略了去创新,当然创新岂是那么容易,就像下面的这篇申请文书,被纽约时报刊载。不过对于留学生来说,也是可以模仿一下的,当然得有自己的新意才行,不然的话,还是会被美国大学给拒了,特别是名校,每一份材料都是彰显竞争力的依据,下面51due海外文书平台介绍一下这篇优秀申请文书范文。

纽约时报中文网举办了一项征文活动,邀请申请美国大学课程、并成功拿到Offer的中国读者分享帮助他们拿到入学资格的申请文书范文。下面是其中的一篇。

I Observe the World Through Science and Arts申请文书范文

The aircraft turbulence stops. As the plane moves above the grim clouds, a bright beam of sunlight slips through the window. Outside the window is a brand new world: the once suffocating sky has opened. The sun, nature’s omnipotent artist, reluctantly bids farewell, turning the azure into tangerine. Stormy clouds boil underneath, with the size of a boundless ocean and the fury of the Yellow River… 

"Hey Tony, what are you doing?" My friend asks.
"The sky… it's like God’s masterpiece. How can it be so beautiful?" I mumble as my soul returns to reality. 
"Come on. You’re already in high school. Leave the sky for kids to marvel at."
Embarrassed, I try to defend myself, but a voice of doubt stifles my words: What is the point of staring outside? 

I have always been attracted to nature's beauty. It makes me think. I still remember my childhood hobby of looking at the night sky and the star lights that spent years, or even centuries, to arrive at our planet. Those same lights enabled me to travel through time and visualize my dream of being a scientist, artist and innovator: 

As a luminescent star trail poured into my eyes, I found myself looking through the eyes of Galileo, awed by the infinite opportunities of the universe. Tracing the outline of a quartet of celestial lights, I saw Pachelbel sitting high, appreciating his greatest masterpiece — Canon in D. Suddenly, a bright comet raced past, leading me into a small garage, where Steve Jobs changed the world by turning pure science into a real work of art. 

Human history recorded in those ancient lights flashed before my eyes, unfolding, dissolving. It seemed to me that life was both transient and everlasting. Just as the lights of dead stars were still decorating the night sky above us, so the accomplishments of those ephemeral lives were still affecting the way we lived every day. As a child, I naively hoped that in the future, when people look up at the sky, they would also see my story as an innovator standing at the crossroad of science and arts. That is still my dream.

Nature gives me two eyes. Through one eye, I observe the world of science; through the other eye, I appreciate the world of arts. On seeing the perfect shape of snowflakes melting in my hand, I run home to search for the formation of snow crystals. Noticing the gradual change in the color of the dusk sky, I begin to delve deeper into the scattering of lights. The sun’s daily movements inspire me to think about the rise and fall of empires and lives. The tender light of the moon that has always guarded human civilization promotes my curiosity about our ancestors’ philosophies of human existence. Viewing nature through the lens of science and arts, I truly enjoy the beauty of this three-dimensional world.

The plane turns right and my eyes regain focus on the sky outside. Darkness falls. Clouds dissolve. Below the overarching sky, the planet of human lives rotates, now illuminated by clusters of man-made sparks. In the distant horizon where nature and human civilization meet, the boundary between science and arts vanishes.

那么, 这篇优秀申请文书范文,是否让你感到惊奇,选择一个适合自己的话题,然后去发挥,当然,对于这样的申请文书范文,对于文笔的要求是比较高的,写作能力不强的可能还是有点望离若即之感,申请文书的写作还是存在一点困难,不过,想要申请名校的你,还不赶紧提高自己的写作水平,拥有优秀的申请文书,好的文笔还是能加一点分的,当然太过于显耀也不行,但至少有点底子把,那么,关于优秀申请文书范文,51due论文代写平台就说到这了。(论文代写)

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