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Self-Assessment Essay--论文代写范文精选

2015-09-15 来源: 51due教员组 类别: Essay范文


51due论文代写网精选essay代写范文:“Self-Assessment Essay”。这篇文章作者主要讲述了对本学期自己写作课的学习情况的一个自我总结。这学期我进修写作课之后,我发现我的写作技巧有了很大的进步,现在我的论文和我的文章完全不同于我第一次开始这门课程时写的东西。

After my writing classes this semester, I find that my writing skills have improved a lot and my essays now are totally different from what I wrote when I first started this course. I remember that I have written two essays in this course. The first one is an essay about my young life.

Several years ago when I was sixteen, I left my hometown and went to another province where my grandparents lived in for studying. The reason why I wanted to study in America is that I expected to keep distance with my family, especially my parents. At first I didn’t think of any troubles that might happen between me and my friends but gradually our energy was used up. Without the desire to play together, my friends and I started to have more and more impatience with each other. After happy time, we quarreled with each other because of some details in life. What’s more, at the end of that semester, I got very low grades because I didn’t pay much attention to my study and homework, even examinations. This is only the first reason that I got bad grades, the second reason is that I had to do everything by myself so the whole life was a big mass. Every day I not only needed to read books but also needed to wash clothes, cook for myself. I was very exhausted and could not get up early in the morning even with the help of an alarm clock. The third reason is that I needed to care for myself. When I was sick nobody could help me and I often cried a lot. According to those three reasons, I got the conclusion that if I could have a second choice, I would rather choose to live with my parents instead of staying away from them.

I believed that this first essay has some advantages, for example I clearly listed different reasons and have a very specific line of thought. However, there are many language and grammar mistakes in this essay. My teacher has listed them out and I revised them very seriously, then I started to write the second essay.

The second essay was about the different culture between China and America. I chose a very typical example to clarify my point of views: dogs. Dogs are treated totally different in China and America. In China dogs are just dogs, only few families would feed a dog in their home. However in America, almost every family would choose to feed a dog because they believed that a dog is a member in a family, they regarded dogs as their friends and even dear ones. I also mentioned the treatment of homeless dogs in those two countries. In China there were many homeless dogs on the streets, and nearly nobody would choose to take them home and they might got even worse treatment: to be killed. In America, there were very few homeless dogs and even several dogs didn’t have homes, some families or institutions would take them home and give them good treatment.

I think this essay improved a lot compared with the first one. Firstly, the topic has been advanced from my own story to a topic about culture. Secondly, I have made several comparisons between two cultures and chosen a simple but typical example. Thirdly, the language and grammar mistakes have decreased in this essay, though there are still a lot.

As matter of improving my writing skills, I have decided to take several measures.

To read more books can help me correct my grammar mistakes. I now understand that the important reason that I cannot write correctly is because I didn’t read too much books so that I cannot figure out what is correct and what is wrong. Reading can also help me improve my writing thoughts so that I can make the whole essay more fluent. So from now on I need to read one book every week and make enough notes and feedback to better absorb knowledge in those books.

To learn more skills in writing course. Maybe because I didn’t pay much attention to classes before, my essay lacks necessary writing skills which would makes my essay feels not interesting. So in later classes, I need to listen more attentively and take notes seriously. Besides, I also need to try to use those skills in each of my essays so that I will remember them and put them in proper use.

To write more and take essays to teachers for correction and advice. The most important measure is to write more essays during my free time besides homework. Through my own writing, I can understand what is needed and what is lacked in my writing process. When I finished an essay, I also need to take it to teachers for advice and correction, and also tell my questions generated during my writing process, which will help solve my problems and also improved my writing skills.

Writing courses are really helpful and I believed after more writing courses I can write better essays in the future.

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